Monday, May 11, 2015

The Gamer



2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Taylah, please read your story to yourself and edit your work.

You can then get a buddy to ready it and you can edit it together with your buddy.

Your next learning step could be about paragraphing.

Anonymous said...

i liked writing this story it was fun and took me ages to work on.Next time im going to try to write a story with paragraphs